Thursday, October 13, 2011

"The Monkey's Paw"

Consider the fakir’s statement that “fate ruled people’s lives, and those 
who interfered with it did so to their sorrow.”
Vocab:


1. condoling        v.     expressing sympathy
2. rubicund         adj.  a red or ruddy complexion
3. visage            n.     face
4. fakir              n.     a Hindu religious person--usually knows magic
5. presumptuous  adj.  acting on assumption
6. Arabian Nights n.     collection of Mid. Eastern folk tales
7. antimacassar   n.     a small cloth placed on the backs of chairs to help keep them clean
8. talisman         n.     an amulet or charm
9. simian            adj.  monkey-like
10. prosaic          adj. commonplace
11. credulity        n.    gullibility
12. bibulous        adj.  fond of drink
13. furtively        adv. secretively
14. fusillade        n.    a rapid outburst in quick succession
15. doughty         adj. brave

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Grammar...

Chompchomp.com is my favorite grammar website. Bookmark it for future reference.


You can get extra credit for visiting these sites.
Follow directions, then scroll down to find out how to earn the EC.


1. Review comma splices and fused sentences. Fused sentences = run-ons.   Go to this site:
http://www.chompchomp.com/exercises.htm and do Exercise 1 online. 


2. If you were unclear today about main (independent) and subordinate (dependent) clauses, go to this page and review them.


http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/mainclause.htm


http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/subordinateclause.htm






Stop when you get to the part about relative clauses!














3.To test yourself on clauses, try this basic online exercise:


http://www.myschoolhouse.com/courses/O/1/56.asp



4. More clause practice:


http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/indep_clause_quiz.htm

For extra credit, email me with the name of the author of this poem: Fire and Ice.

Thursday, October 6, 2011

"Tell-Tale Heart" Police Report

RD due: Tuesday, Oct. 11
FD due: Thursday, Oct. 13 


Instead of posting the example I shared with you in class today, I've listed some examples for showing writing and links to sites that will help you get a sense of an authentic police report.




Showing Language vs. Telling Language
  • What kind of police person are you? Compassionate? Aggressive? Loud? Patient? New at your job? An older, seasoned veteran? How will you convey these traits?
  • What about the suspect? How can you accurately capture his emotions as expressed through his actions?
Make a point of using "showing language," not "telling language." If you tell someone something, it doesn't involve much detail, and s/he won't be able to imagine it clearly. What you've shared remains an abstract idea. However, if you show what you mean to say through vivid detail, you give evidence (details) that make the image concrete.


Think of showing language as writing that could be recorded or filmed. In other words, it could be proven by any of the senses (taste, touch, sound, sight, smell).


Examples:


Telling:
The soldier was impressive. (Note: If possible, avoid beginning with "S/he was...")


Showing:
Ed, a stocky, barrel-chested man in his thirties, marched into the room and took command of the situation as he announced in his booming voice, "Alright. Attention, everyone."


Telling: 
He was nervous.


Showing:
Arms flailing, he paced the length of the room wildly. Finally, he sat in the ancient, rickety chair I offered him, but his left eye twitched uncontrollably. Hearing him speak was painful; his voice quivered, and words came slowly as if he were just  recovering long-lost language skills.


Telling:
The car went around the corner.


Showing:
The sleek beast of a car careened violently around the corner at Ojai Ave. and Signal Street, leaving only a streak of light and a gasp of exhaust in its path.




Writing a Police Report:


If you're interested in writing a more authentic-seeming police report, check these links:

"How to Write a Police Report"
http://www.ehow.com/how_4441251_write-police-report.html



"How to Write a Great Police Report"
http://www.ehow.com/how_5461354_write-great-police-report.html

"How to Write a Police Report Narrative"
http://www.ehow.co.uk/how_6063691_write-police-report-narrative.html



Extra Credit: Email me with this in the subject line: Yogi Bear.
 

Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Poe Comic Strip

Instead of doing a comic strip version of "The Raven," we'll be doing one for "Tell-Tale Heart."

Here's an inspiring example for
"Murder in the Rue Morgue."
Here's the link to the comic book, which you have to view page by page.

http://thehorrorsofitall.blogspot.com/2009/01/murders-in-rue-morgue-morella.html

Scroll down below Edgar's picture to see it.

If you want to listen to "Murder in the Rue Morgue," you can download it for free here:



It's long, but good.




For extra credit, email me with the word orangutan in the subject line. Please spell it correctly.

Thursday, September 29, 2011

Really, Truly Understanding "The Raven"

Here's a link that will really help clarify any parts of the poem that are unclear to you:

http://www.shmoop.com/the-raven/stanzas-1-2-summary.html

This should play the Vincent Price video we saw today in class:





Here's a link to the biographical video of  Poe we watched in class on Tuesday:

BIography: Edgar Allan Poe - Full Episode - Edgar Allan Poe Videos - Biography.com

Oh, and if you want extra credit, email me with this in the subject line: 
Felix the Cat

Tuesday, September 27, 2011

E. A. Poe



As we begin our study of Edgar Allen Poe,  I'd like you to familiarize yourself with "The Raven."



http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Raven

I'm assigning everybody one of the 18 stanzas to memorize. Scroll down below the poem to see which stanza is yours. You can earn extra credit if you're  willing to also memorize 17 & 18 in addition to your assigned stanza.


For tomorrow (Wed., 9/28):
  • Please have your stanza neatly written out on an index card exactly as you see it on the page.
  • Make sure to write which # your stanza is on the card.
  • In order to really understand the poem, please go to this website:

http://teachersfirst.com/lessons/raven/st1.cfm

  • There's one stanza on each page. Click through to find yours. Roll your mouse over words you don't understand.
  • You can copy your stanza either from the link or from here.
  • Scroll wayyyyyyy down to find out which stanza is yours.
Also, you can watch and hear a great version of the poem here :



or click here:







    The Raven 
    by Edgar Allan Poe
     1
    Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,
    Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
    While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,
    As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
    "'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door -
    Only this, and nothing more."
    2
    Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
    And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
    Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow
    From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
    For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore -
    Nameless here for evermore.
    3
    And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain
    Thrilled me - filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;
    So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating,
    "'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door -
    Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door; -
    This it is, and nothing more."
    4
    Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,
    "Sir," said I, "or Madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;
    But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,
    And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,
    That I scarce was sure I heard you"- here I opened wide the door; -
    Darkness there, and nothing more.
    5
    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
    Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;
    But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token,
    And the only word there spoken was the whispered word, "Lenore?"
    This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word, "Lenore!" -
    Merely this, and nothing more.
    6
    Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
    Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
    "Surely," said I, "surely that is something at my window lattice:
    Let me see, then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore -
    Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore; -
    'Tis the wind and nothing more."
    7
    Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,
    In there stepped a stately raven of the saintly days of yore;
    Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;
    But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door -
    Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door -
    Perched, and sat, and nothing more.
    8
    Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
    By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore.
    "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou," I said, "art sure no craven,
    Ghastly grim and ancient raven wandering from the Nightly shore -
    Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!"
    Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
    9
    Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
    Though its answer little meaning- little relevancy bore;
    For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
    Ever yet was blest with seeing bird above his chamber door -
    Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
    With such name as "Nevermore."
    10
    But the raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only
    That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
    Nothing further then he uttered- not a feather then he fluttered -
    Till I scarcely more than muttered, "other friends have flown before -
    On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before."
    Then the bird said, "Nevermore."
    11
    Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
    "Doubtless," said I, "what it utters is its only stock and store,
    Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful Disaster
    Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore -
    Till the dirges of his Hope that melancholy burden bore
    Of 'Never - nevermore'."
    12
    But the Raven still beguiling all my fancy into smiling,
    Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and door;
    Then upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
    Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore -
    What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt and ominous bird of yore
    Meant in croaking "Nevermore."
    13
    This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
    To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
    This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
    On the cushion's velvet lining that the lamplight gloated o'er,
    But whose velvet violet lining with the lamplight gloating o'er,
    She shall press, ah, nevermore!
    14
    Then methought the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
    Swung by Seraphim whose footfalls tinkled on the tufted floor.
    "Wretch," I cried, "thy God hath lent thee - by these angels he hath sent thee
    Respite - respite and nepenthe, from thy memories of Lenore:
    Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!"
    Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
    15
    "Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil! -
    Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
    Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted -
    On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore -
    Is there - is there balm in Gilead? - tell me - tell me, I implore!"
    Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
    16
    "Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil - prophet still, if bird or devil!
    By that Heaven that bends above us - by that God we both adore -
    Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
    It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels name Lenore -
    Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore."
    Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
    17
    "Be that word our sign in parting, bird or fiend," I shrieked, upstarting -
    "Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
    Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
    Leave my loneliness unbroken!- quit the bust above my door!
    Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!"
    Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
    18
    And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
    On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
    And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
    And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
    And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
    Shall be lifted - nevermore! 
    *********************

    Stanza #
    Per. 1
    Per. 2
    1
    Alana, Claire
    Nicole, Jordan
    2
    Olivia, Chloe
    Maya, Holden
    3
    Rena, Tatum
    Sarah, Gabrielle
    4
    Maddie, Jayce
    Colby, Konnor
    5
    Jessica, Nathan
    Tori, Wendy
    6
    Jacob, Ally
    Joseph, Chaney
    7
    Hudson, Landon
    Finn, Emily
    8
    Aidan, Rebekah
    Kayla, Kayleigh
    9
    Vinnie, Bella
    Natalie, Cameron
    10
    Audrey, Lexi
    Ryan L., Jose
    11
    Dylan, Cori
    Taylor L., Taylor M.
    12
    Katie, Shelby
    Ryan M., Spencer M.
    13
    Katherine, Bailey
    Ryan P., Lindsay R.
    14
    Lydia, Francisco
    Tyler, Jerin
    15
    Morgan, Odessa
    Dillon S., Spencer S.
    16
    Meryn, Kyla, Lucia
    Amber, Kasara
    17
    ??
    ??
    18
    ??
    ??










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